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Post by Doom Wanderer on Jan 9, 2015 20:37:54 GMT -5
SUBJECT: THE ARBITER PROFESSION: MERCENARY SPECIES: HUMAN SEX: MALE KNOWN FOR: BEING RAISED A MANDALORIAN, AND SPENDING MOST OF HIS LIFE IN COMBAT. EQUIPMENT: LAST SEEN IN MANDALORIAN ARMOR, ENERGY SABER LAST SEEN:
STATUS: AWOL
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Post by Director Rolond on Jan 9, 2015 23:23:59 GMT -5
It has got a very halo-y feel. Couldn't possibly imagine why.
I'd prefer if you didn't use a picture of the full Spartan. I did say you could use the helmet, so the robed ones are fine. In addition, you need to change the name of your armor. Your bio doesn't have much to it, however if that's the style you want it, then so be it.
EDIT: If you're going to have a character named "The Arbiter," I hope you have a good reason why, and or it is supported by a backstory.
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Post by Wrath on Jan 9, 2015 23:51:43 GMT -5
It has got a very halo-y feel. Couldn't possibly imagine why. I'd prefer if you didn't use a picture of the full Spartan. I did say you could use the helmet, so the robed ones are fine. In addition, you need to change the name of your armor. Your bio doesn't have much to it, however if that's the style you want it, then so be it. EDIT: If you're going to have a character named "The Arbiter," I hope you have a good reason why, and or it is supported by a backstory. Yay
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Post by Doom Wanderer on Jan 9, 2015 23:55:41 GMT -5
It has got a very halo-y feel. Couldn't possibly imagine why. I'd prefer if you didn't use a picture of the full Spartan. I did say you could use the helmet, so the robed ones are fine. In addition, you need to change the name of your armor. Your bio doesn't have much to it, however if that's the style you want it, then so be it. EDIT: If you're going to have a character named "The Arbiter," I hope you have a good reason why, and or it is supported by a backstory. Yay Yay what?
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Post by Wrath on Jan 10, 2015 0:00:25 GMT -5
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