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Post by Wrath on Jan 9, 2015 23:11:05 GMT -5
*SOBBING MATHEMATICALLY*
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Post by Director Rolond on Jan 9, 2015 23:12:18 GMT -5
You asked for feedback, here it is in the nicest way. This is really, really bad.
Your name is extremely uncreative, your race states unknown when it is clearly known, and you don't even have the profession filled out. In addition, your picture of Duke Nukem is like maximum edgelord. It's way over the top and uh, he looks more like a gang thug than a Sith tbh. Quick tips:
-New name
-New Picture
-Actually finish the app.
This takes place in a universe where you have the capability to travel to hundreds of different planets, and choose from thousands of different cultures. You chose the name "Michael Zimmerman" and made your picture of Duke Nukem.
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Post by Wrath on Jan 9, 2015 23:14:33 GMT -5
You asked for feedback, here it is in the nicest way. This is really, really bad. Your name is extremely uncreative, your race states unknown when it is clearly known, and you don't even have the profession filled out. In addition, your picture of Duke Nukem is like maximum edgelord. It's way over the top and uh, he looks more like a gang thug than a Sith tbh. Quick tips: -New name -New Picture -Actually finish the app. And a quote from a friend of mine, "Fat friend on the dot."
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Post by Deleted on Jan 24, 2015 21:29:09 GMT -5
delete ur comments so this thread will be gone and the character bio area will look cleaner to guests
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